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100 word challenge 12th January

  • 12th Jan, 2015 at 8:33pm

The two children crept towards the open door…

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  • Jack
    21st Jan, 2015 at 8:00pmm

    Jack and Jude moved into a new house, they just started to unpack when their mum said “why don’t you go and explore the amazing garden”. So they ran all the way into their new garden. They then went and got a ball and started to play catch.They soon got bored so they had a look round until Jude found a little door, Jude did not tell Jack what hed seen. One night there was a big BANG they went into the garden the door was open. They couldnt believe what was behind the door. They were in shock…..

    • Mrs Rafferty
      23rd Jan, 2015 at 1:18pmm

      What did they find?

  • Carys
    19th Jan, 2015 at 5:02pmm

    The beast
    ” Doyou beileve in…THE BEAST.”Jessica said to Opal .
    “What’s THE BEAST? Asked Opal.
    Opal is best friends with Jessica.They have been since nursery.They were walking through the woods when they heard a strange sound.
    “What’s that noise?Lets investagate.
    Opal said curiously.Jessica and Opal followed the noise to a weird looking hut .
    “Shall we look
    ,Jess, or not?Asked Opal.
    “Yeah, the beast might be in there.Said Jessica.
    “O.k,but …AHHHHHHHH! HELP JESS!
    Screamed Opal.
    The beast pulled Opal in.Jessica pulled and pulled but it didn’t work.Suddenly ,the beast gave up!
    “What. Is that it.”Jess said dissappointingly.
    “But,I’m alive! Said Opal gladly.
    They went home and had some cocoa and snuggled up in blankets.

    The beast
    ” Doyou beileve in…THE BEAST.”Jessica said to Opal .
    “What’s THE BEAST? Asked Opal.
    Opal is best friends with Jessica.They have been since nursery.They were walking through the woods when they heard a strange sound.
    “What’s that noise?Lets investagate.
    Opal said curiously.Jessica and Opal followed the noise to a weird looking hut .
    “Shall we look
    ,Jess, or not?Asked Opal.
    “Yeah, the beast might be in there.Said Jessica.
    “O.k,but …AHHHHHHHH! HELP JESS!
    Screamed Opal.
    The beast pulled Opal in.Jessica pulled and pulled but it didn’t work.Suddenly ,the beast gave up!
    “What. Is that it.”Jess said dissappointingly.
    “But,I’m alive! Said Opal gladly.
    They went home and had some cocoa and snuggled up in blankets.

  • Luke Y4
    18th Jan, 2015 at 6:19pmm

    The two children crept towards the door and peered out. Their parents had told them to run and escape from the soldiers and they had gone to their special tiny hide away up in the rocky hills above their village. They had been hiding there for what seemed like forever but it had only been a few hours. Everything was now deadly silent and the sound of guns firing had now stopped. They plucked up the courage to step out from where they had been hiding and the bright sunlight hurt their eyes. What about their family, were they safe?

    • Mrs Rafferty
      19th Jan, 2015 at 11:09amm

      Fantastic writing Luke! I can’t wait to find out what happens next.

  • Harry
    18th Jan, 2015 at 4:14pmm

    The two children crept towards the open door. They went through the door. The door was old, ragged and creepy. Inside the door was a wondrous world with stars day and night and purple grass. It was like nothing they had ever seen. But there was a foe! A giant dragon!!! The dragon popped out from the purple grass. The dragon was fifty m tall with razor sharp fangs and blood dribbling down its chin. The two children fought the dragon in combat. The two children won the battle against the mighty dragon. The two children cheered for joy. Bravo.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      19th Jan, 2015 at 11:11amm

      You have included some great descriptive vocabulary. We’ll done Harry

  • Tamsin
    18th Jan, 2015 at 3:04pmm

    I opened the mysterious door I went into the dark, damp cave. It creaked like a cat in the night. As I walked into the cave I wondered, who would put a door on a cave? It could be a house, or it could be a magic cave. When I went to see what it was, there were some pirates having a meeting.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      19th Jan, 2015 at 11:12amm

      I wonder what they were talking about?

  • Jacintha
    18th Jan, 2015 at 2:58pmm

    Once upon a time, when the second world war was on ,there lived a very poor family. The father of the family was called Martin and his wife was called Sarah. They had two children. The children was called Alice Martin and Emily Martin. The children were twins. One day ,when the children were playing they noticed a door which was not there before and they decided to go inside the shed when their parents were outside. They went in the shed just as they decided to do when their parents were not at home. What would happen to them.

  • isobel
    18th Jan, 2015 at 2:13pmm

    I opened the door and entered the endless blue sea. I was under the sea! I could breathe under water and see everything clearly without goggles. The first thing I saw was a shadow about my size heading towards me I couldn’t move, I was so scared. It got closer and closer until it was just about a meter away from me suddenly I realised that it was a mermaid .She had long red hair a green scaly tail and little star fish on her ears. We had a great day riding dolphins and making friends with Bubblegum.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      19th Jan, 2015 at 11:14amm

      What an exciting discovery!

  • Harry
    17th Jan, 2015 at 1:59pmm

    The two children crept towards the open door and out into a circular dip. Their names were Ruby and Tom. They had been searching for a way out after wandering round in damp, dark, with a little bit of light, and gloomy tunnels. They had been with their family on a hike when Tom was tired so he sat down on a rock but suddenly fell into the stone wall behind him which then closed. He tried to grab on to Ruby but instead they both fell in. This happened days ago………

  • Dominic
    17th Jan, 2015 at 11:26amm

    The two children crept towards the open door to go to the party but they realised Shrek was there with Donkey and the babies. The babies were on Donkey and Donkey was on Shrek galloping around the shack having a great time at the best party ever! “Are you going to come in?” shouted Shrek to the boys. The boys thought for a second then decided to come inside.

  • Eoghan
    17th Jan, 2015 at 11:26amm

    The two children walked through the long dark tunnel and they saw a little light at the end. They crept slowly to open the tall old wooden door and when they walked through, they dived into a world of dinosaurs! The first thing they saw were six hungry Allosaurus, ten giant Diplodocus being chased by them and lush green ferns. Suddenly, one of the Allosaurus turned around and chased them. The children raced for their lives up a steep hill and only just made it back into the tunnel…..

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