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100 word challenge 14th September

  • 14th Sep, 2015 at 10:01am

Look at this beautiful pattern in nature. Write a detailed descripion using lots of adjectives.

 

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  • billy
    20th Sep, 2015 at 9:21pmm

    Beautiful, tiny, fascinating, the creamy, beige and black butterfly with a hint of red, perches on a thin branch. It has two black, pointy antennae shooting out from his miniscule, delicate head. The pattern on its wings are circular, the patterns in the middle look like colons and semi-colons. It looks happy and peaceful sat on its own. Although he looks content, I think it would be great if he had another butterfly to play with and be friends with.

  • Olivia
    20th Sep, 2015 at 7:57pmm

    Beautiful,pretty,the butterfly spreading her wings in delight.Amazed,the sweet butterfly with her gorgeous patterns ,they looked like ears her skin was a creamy beige colour with black amazing swirls on both its wings,, it had a bright red line.It was really symmetrical .It was very still I thought it was waiting to eat something .You can very faintly see its veins they were light blue.It has long,dark,black antennas on its small face.I wish I didn’t have to go.

  • Jessica
    20th Sep, 2015 at 6:54pmm

    Amazing, bright and colourful. The wings of a butterfly are beautiful to see on a hot summers day fluttering and soaring from flower to flower. All day long it elegantly endeavours to collect pollen from the lush scented flowers. Take a close look if you ever see one land close by. You will notice the beautiful pattern on it’s wings with a golden background and two black rings and a line of red. It also has six delicate legs you will see quite easily and a small round head.

  • Veronica
    20th Sep, 2015 at 6:02pmm

    One day I looked out of my bedroom window and I saw the most beautiful, the most amazing butterfly in my hole life. Its wings were like swirl designs and in the middle it looked like the numbers 8 and 9. I had a closer look at the butterfly and I decided to name it Beaty. As I kept going to the flowery garden every morning, I noticed in spring the butterfly liked roses the most because of its sweet smell and wonderful polen for it to drink. If you look carefully at the butterfly you will see that it has lovely black eyes , perfect black antennes and a very long pink tongue.

  • Martha
    20th Sep, 2015 at 3:35pmm

    What a beautiful Butterfly l thought when l saw it, two beautifully patterned, symmetrical wings that have fluttered thousands of times every day. They each have their own unique patterns and colors, this one has colors that remind me of Autumn, the beautiful striking Rich Red, the earthy Brown and black like Pitch Black. She flies freely around my garden in search of Pollen from any flowers left over from Summer. Should l try to catch it?, l only want to hold her, but she flutters away, frightened or maybe she’s just playing with me as l run after her.

  • Geoffrey
    19th Sep, 2015 at 3:10pmm

    Majestic, beautiful, lovely, the amazing butterfly flew off with a glorious flutter. The more he flew, the more he needed to eat. The butterfly has soft curves of ruby red with a shadow black antennae. This creature is an insects. These type of creature is clasify with joy in there prestigious life. The humans endeavour to not scare butterfly but they do. Also this creature has the most buetiful patterns in the whole wide world.

  • Lily
    19th Sep, 2015 at 1:54pmm

    Wow, what a beautiful creature, a picture of beauty. This butterfly has fragile wings, which are beige and black and creates a beautiful pattern. On the outside of the wings is a magical streak of red. The pattern almost resembles the number eighty nine, almost a tiger stripe, showing us the beauty of the natural world. With it’s long antennas which are used to search for pollen. I see the marvellous butterfly seeking flowers, skipping from one to another. How graceful, majestic this creature is. If only it would fly to me and sit on my shoulder.

  • Joanie
    19th Sep, 2015 at 1:01pmm

    This butterfly is very beautiful and majestic. Its tongue is as long as my tongue. The pattern on it looks like the number 8 and 9. The more beautiful butterflies are, the more prestigious they are. I would just love to see this butterfly in my garden. Butterflies love to flutter on to a plant called buddleia. This butterfly reminds me of a zebra because of its nice patterns. It has 2 long antennae. Everyday it endeavours to get all of the pollen out of a flower. I love the insect classification of butterflies and moths. My favourite butterfly is called a peacock.

  • Caitlin
    19th Sep, 2015 at 9:47amm

    The butterfly has a pattern on its wing, it forms a circle around the main wing. It’s wings are very beautiful and creamy with black circles lines across it.
    The butterfly has a very wing which tells me that it’s an adult butterfly, the butterfly has flown into the garden to feed on suitable nectar. I have seen this butterfly now and I am eager to visit the butterfly house with my family to find this particular type of butterfly as it’s very charming.

  • Sarah
    19th Sep, 2015 at 8:58amm

    THE BEAUTIFUL BUTTERFLY
    Beige colour are its wings, with dark brown patterns and red stripes that are as red as pure blood. Elegantly it flies around gardens full of flowers to collet pollen. It endeavours not to get lost in the darkness, so she can get back to her kingdom who love her. They do collet pollen for the same use as bees, for they both use it for food, however butterfly have it when they collet it, while bees store it for times where there is no food. There more than 100 species of butterfly in the world, however this kind is one of the most pretties out of them.

  • Dylan
    17th Sep, 2015 at 9:48pmm

    It is a patterned butterfly with some circles on its wings. In the middle of them, are two patterns that look like human ears. The wing colours are mostly black and creamy beige with a curve of red. Its veins are hard to see but are as long as the wings. The butterfly is about three cm tall and three cm long. If it were on your hand it would probably feel very light and a bit tickly. On the tips of its wings it looks a bit hairy and fluffy. On its head it’s got two short, black antennas.

  • Millie
    16th Sep, 2015 at 7:50pmm

    Beautiful, amazing and delicate is this striped butterfly. She flutters in the sun, her wings stretched out wide. Every morning she endeavours to land on the petals of a sunflower, smelling the pollen and taking in the breeze. The more she flies, the more her wings get bolder. She is a work of art, beautiful colours on her wings with a splash of red to add a bright colour. Butterflies are wonderful creatures, I once had a butterfly house where I watched them grow from caterpillars to butterflies I was amazed and saddened when I had to let them go.

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      17th Sep, 2015 at 1:30pmm

      Lovely Millie. Well done for using the word of the week.

  • Elizabeth
    16th Sep, 2015 at 6:11pmm

    The butterfly spreads its magnificent wings to show its vibrant colours for all the world to see. The Orange is comparable to freshly spewed lava and the mixture of browns reminding me of leaves on an autumn morning. The patterns are similar to the rings found on the inside of a tree stump. About to take flight, to flutter among the clouds, it endeavours to achieve new heights. It’s tiny little antenna glisten in the sunlight. The more it grows, the more majestic it becomes. It truly is a magnificent creature, prestigious in the insect Kingdom.

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      17th Sep, 2015 at 1:29pmm

      Excellent Beth!

  • Madison
    16th Sep, 2015 at 4:56pmm

    The butterfly has a beautiful pattern on it’s wings. The ovals in the middle look like ears and on the wings I can see very faint lines. Butterflies come in different shapes and sizes and very nice patterns. Butterflies use their antennae to smell flowers so they have a good sence of smell. Butterflies collect pollen just like bees. At the beginning butterflies are caterpillars and then they go in a cocoon and soon after they come out of the shell and are butterflies. I really like butterflies as well.

  • Summer
    16th Sep, 2015 at 4:27pmm

    A butterfly has many colours some are symmetrical and some have patterns. You may see a white butterfly which is called cabbage butterfly. They are so pretty and beautiful.
    Everyone must like them.
    If I was a butterfly I would flutter around beautiful pretty gardens.
    I like to watch them delicately fly from flower to flower and across the green summer grass.
    I think butterflies have a,zing patterns and I like the colours of this butterfly,because they remind me of autumn colours.

  • Ellysha
    15th Sep, 2015 at 5:08pmm

    A butterfly is a beautiful insect it has 6 legs 2 small &2 bigger they are all different colours but their colours match each side they start off as a caterpillar & then turn into a chrysalis it has eyes on its wings that make up part of its colour & the difference between one & another it also as 2 antenna which help it feel it’s way into places.

  • Joseph
    15th Sep, 2015 at 5:02pmm

    The beautiful, dazzling, colourful, butterfly sat quietly on the branch of a big, brown tree. I looked at the wonderful animal. It was beige with black swirls all over its delicate wings. It also had a bright red streak down it’s back. It moved as slow as a snail. It’s antennas were so long I could touch them. I picked it up but it was frightened, scared, confused, and then it flew away. I saw it the next day, it was as beautiful as ever.

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      16th Sep, 2015 at 7:54amm

      Fantastic Joseph! Well done for using a ‘3 -ed’ sentence.

    • Carol
      23rd Sep, 2015 at 7:13amm

      Quite agree with Mrs T Joseph

      Nana

  • Alister
    15th Sep, 2015 at 11:47amm

    This is a beautiful butterfly, it has beautiful patterns on its wings. The pattern looks like kidneys, and there are stripes like a maze. It has red on the outside of its wings, the red is as red as a ruby. The more you look at the wings, the more mysterious they become. The wings are actually made up of microscopic scales. It sucks pollen from the long tube on its face; it flies uncontrollably around gardens and in fields trying to collect pollen from flowers. The butterfly has an extremely good sense of smell, it uses its long antennae to smell where the flowers are.

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