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100 word challenge 21st January

  • 19th Jan, 2015 at 11:11pm

Sam was playing in the park when he saw coming towards him, a small friendly looking dog. He couldn’t believe it! He had always wanted a dog. If he took it home would his mum let him keep it? What should he do?

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  • Tynesha
    25th Jan, 2015 at 9:10pmm

    Sam was playing in the park when he saw a friendly dog coming towards him. He had always wanted a dog, but he wasn’t bothered what type or colour, he just wanted a dog. He decided to take the dog home and hide it in his wardrobe. He wasn’t sure if he should tell his mum or not. The dog started to bark and his mum came to see where the noise was coming from. Sam had to show his mum the dog and explain where it had come from. His mum said they couldn’t keep this one as surely it must belong to someone else. So, they took it to the police station and then his mum said that he could have a dog all of his own that he could choose.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 7:42pmm

      What a lovely ending!

  • Dani
    25th Jan, 2015 at 8:00pmm

    A dog walked along the path way of the park a boy saw the dog and took him home he asked his parents if he could keep the mystery dog. His parents said, if you can take care of him food and you have to buy his food.The boy said I’m going to get the pup some food. I’ve named him Sam . Great name said his parents . When sam came home, the pup was so happy he couldn’t stop barking.

  • Harry
    25th Jan, 2015 at 4:20pmm

    Sam wasn’t sure. “Should I take it home with me?” He thought for a moment…..“I think I should take him or her home with me. “No I’ll take it to the pound”. Soon the rightful owner came back and gasped at the sight. AAAGH!!!!!!! He screamed in terror. Sam was in the pound. The dog was howling as loud as an air craft. Sam said to the manager “I think I will take him home with me” “ok” said the manager. The man caught Sam coming out of the pound. He stomped to Sam. “Give me my dog”. THE END.

  • Alice
    25th Jan, 2015 at 3:45pmm

    Lola the lonely puppy

    “CUTE!”exclaimed Megan. She was just going for a walk when
    Megan spotted a lonely puppy on the park path! She had always wanted a puppy.
    Who did she belong to? She decided to take her home. Megan
    called her Lola. She was an extremely cute and adorable
    labrador with brown fur just like chocolate.

    Megan hoped her mum would let Lola stay, it would be hard to hide or disguise a dog. Once home her mum wondered what was trailing behind her. Megan pleaded and convinced her mum to let her keep her lost little Lola!

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 7:34pmm

      Did she keep the dog?

  • adam
    25th Jan, 2015 at 11:52amm

    Once there was a dog that had a wonderful owner. Everyday his owner would give him 4 sausages to eat. One day when he was out for a walk he was taken off the lead for a run but when he came back, his owner was GONE! He decided to start walking. He didn’t know what to do! Then he saw a boy staring at him. The boy picked him up and took him to a house. Inside he saw someone he loved; it was his owner, his beloved owner he ran off the boys hand to his owners.
    FINISH

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 7:32pmm

      What a lucky dog

  • Laurie
    25th Jan, 2015 at 11:49amm

    The friendly little dog
    Laurie Forsythe
    One day Sam was walking in the park when he saw a dog. Sam couldn’t believe his eyes. The dog stared at Sam.He had always wanted a dog. Sam was not allowed a dog for some reason.Sam thought would my mum let me have a dog if I found the dog?Sam picked up the dog and said, “I’m going to call you Parsley.” Then when Sam got home he showed his mum what he had found. His mum didn’t like the dog but everyone else did so she said “alright if you take care of it.”

  • Zac
    25th Jan, 2015 at 11:32amm

    I went to the park and in front of my eyes was a dog, I decided to call it Derek. I was going back home and found its collar so I went back to get Derek and I took him back home and I asked my Mum if he could stay for one day. My Mum said only one day. The next day I decided to get the number from the collar. I asked my Mum to ring the number and the woman who owned the dog came. I gave Derek a stroke and gave him to the owner.

  • Katie
    25th Jan, 2015 at 9:12amm

    Sam was playing in the park and saw a dog coming towards him, the dog was wagging his tail and looked very excited. Sam realised that the dog had no name tag, it made him very sad as this dog could be homeless.

    Sam called the dog Bouncer, because he was a very bouncy dog. They played all day, until his mum called him home. Sam was scared to leave Bouncer so he brought him with him.
    Sam asked his mum “Can we keep Bouncer?”
    “Maybe,we will see in the morning because his owner may be looking for him” said mum

  • Jacintha
    24th Jan, 2015 at 3:46pmm

    One day Sam was playing in the park when he saw coming towards him, a small friendly looking dog. He couldn’t believe it! He had always wanted a dog. If he took it home would his mum let him keep it? He looked around for the owner of the dog but Sam couldn’t find the owner so he took the dog with him and thought that his parents would not mind. When he got home he told his mum all that had happened. His Mum said he could keep it. The next day he decided to call the dog Ommi.

  • Luke Y4
    24th Jan, 2015 at 3:23pmm

    Sam was playing in the park when he saw coming towards him, a small friendly looking dog. He couldn’t believe it! He had always wanted a dog. If he took it home would his mum let him keep it? What should he do?
    He looked into the dog’s eyes and fell in love with him, the dog seemed to be looking back at him in a way as if to say take me home. Sam slowly walked over to the dog and said in a friendly voice “Hello boy, good boy”.
    Sam then carefully reached out his hand and the dog began to sniff at Sam and then the dog gave Sam’s hand a long wet lick. Sam laughed with joy and gave the dog a loving stroke across his head and body. A bond of friendship had been made and Sam felt he had found the true friend he had been longing for.
    Sam then noticed that the dog had a collar with a lead, the dog was called George. There was an address of where the dog lived, which was only a short walk away from the park. With sadness Sam knew what the right thing was to do and taking hold of the dog’s lead Sam said “Come on boy let’s take you back to your home, I’m sure your family will be missing you”.
    However as Sam walked out of the park he began to think, what if there was no one at the address on the collar? What if George’s family did not want him anymore? Could Sam then take George home? Could this be Sam’s lucky day?

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 11:03amm

      Well done for using rhetorical questions!

  • Cicely
    24th Jan, 2015 at 1:52pmm

    Sam arrived home with his new best friend. He named him Fluffy. Sam’s mum said he could stay until a new home could be found. That night Sam & Fluffy shared the same dream…zzzzz
    …They were in a huge park. Fluffy danced around in the soft, luxurious grass. They ran around in the fresh air. It felt like they had been locked up for years and now they were free. Leaves swayed from side to side as they floated to the ground. Fluffy jumped up to catch them. Fluffy was excited to see what his new owner could offer…zzzz

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 10:55amm

      What a lovely dream!

  • Dominic
    24th Jan, 2015 at 12:20pmm

    Sam was playing in the park when he saw coming towards him, a small friendly looking dog. He couldn’t believe it! He had always wanted a dog. If he took it home would his mum let him keep it? What should he do? So Sam stuffed the small dog into his coat and went to his mum his mum said “Have you got fatter? wait, you’ve eaten all the ice-cream haven’t you? Come here we are going home right now.” So they started walking home Sam’s mum heard growling then looked at Sam and said “are you hungry?” Sam said “no.”

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 10:52amm

      I wonder what happened next?

  • Eoghan
    23rd Jan, 2015 at 7:35pmm

    THE DOG

    Sam picked up the dog, who started barking, and slowly carried it home. He quietly sneaked past his mum and brought it to his bedroom. He then started to think “What should I do?what should I do ?…..”. There and then Sam decided he would tell Challenge mum and put it back in the park , but then he thought “What if mum shouts?”. When he stopped thinking, he found himself already telling his mum so at the end of the story Sam had found the owner of the dog and gave it back. The end

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 10:49amm

      Well done for using rhetorical questions Eoghan!

  • Harry H
    23rd Jan, 2015 at 5:10pmm

    “Wow,” said Sam “I’ve always wanted a dog!”
    He looked around to see if there was anybody who owned the dog, but there wasn’t. “Where have you come from eh?” he asked and the dog barked. “Well let’s see what my mum will say” so he took him home.
    When he got home his mum got a right shock! “He wandered up to me when I was in the park” said Sam. “Well we’d better find who he belongs to” said mum.
    So what happened? The dog was lost and they did find his owner. “What an adventure!” said Sam.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      26th Jan, 2015 at 10:45amm

      I like a happy ending!

  • Carys
    22nd Jan, 2015 at 5:56pmm

    Sorry didn’t finish it.Part 2
    “O.K mum.”
    Sam and Suzie played all day together ,all day ,everyday.
    Sam’s mum did it because it was his birthday Sam didn’t realise .All day he played with her he was very happy.

  • Grace
    22nd Jan, 2015 at 5:48pmm

    Harriet was walking in the park when, she saw coming towards her was a friendly looking dog. Harriet had always wanted a dog, so she picked it up and walked away.

    When Harriet got home she hid the dog under her bed and went down stairs. But little did she know that the dog was going to give birth. As she sat at the dinner table thinking of names for her new dog, she heard five little barks. She raced up stairs leaving her mum and dad open mouthed. Then she saw five small sleeping puppies to name.

    THE END!

    • Mrs Rafferty
      23rd Jan, 2015 at 1:26pmm

      What a surprise! What did her parents say?

  • Carys
    22nd Jan, 2015 at 5:45pmm

    Sam and Suzie
    Sam was a lovely boy .When he was in the park he found a dog. He had always wanted a dog Would his mum let him keep it? Sam decided to call her Suzie. He played with her all day in the park . When he got home
    he asked his mother and surprisingly she said,”Yes my dear, of course but we will have to keep her
    outside.”

  • cameron
    22nd Jan, 2015 at 5:38pmm

    Sam was playing in the park when he saw coming towards him, a small friendly looking dog. He couldn’t believe it! He had always wanted a dog. He was thinking whether his mum would let him keep it he was hoping his mum would let him. He was thinking that he could say that he had been trapped and needed a Challenge and some food and water. He wanted it to be able to come because he loved dogs especially this type of dog. He went towards it hoping it wouldn’t bite him but luckily it did not bite him.

    by Cameron

    • Mrs Rafferty
      23rd Jan, 2015 at 1:23pmm

      Was he allowed to keep the dog?

  • Isobel
    21st Jan, 2015 at 8:11pmm

    The dog came close to me it was very cute. I looked for the owner I couldn’t see it. I took him home my mum wasn’t pleased I told her he had no one to look after him she didn’t belive me. I called him Woody.I played with him in the garden until I realised he had a collar.I took him inside and told mum, she rang the number off the collar.The lady came round in a hour. I played with woody for as long as I could till the owner, Emily came she was nice.I said good bye to woody and off he went.

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