100 word challenge – 21st September

  • 21st Sep, 2015 at 10:52am

What could this beautiful fox be hiding from? Can you use suspense to tell her story?


  • Olivia
    28th Sep, 2015 at 10:18amm

    Frightened, petrified and shocked, the small fox peered through the gaps in the tree and found herself staring straight into the eyes of a big, brown, scary, angry bear! Just then she heard some loud footsteps coming her way. They started getting louder and louder and she started running faster and faster. Suddenly she saw a hole. She was trapped she had to think fast as she was about to fall. She had an idea to jump over it so she leaped over ,but it was too big and she had fallen in…

  • billy
    27th Sep, 2015 at 9:18pmm

    FOX IN A BOX Petrified, lonely, sleepy Jimmy, the baby fox, snuggled up to the small tree. Jimmy peered from behind he tree, only to find his eyes closing. What had happened? He felt a cold patch on his paw and then the sudden pain. He had been shot! Then he fell unconscious. An hour later, he awoke encaged in a dark metal box, without any idea about what had happened. Jimmy scratched hard, quickly,painfully at the box.
    Suddenly, the box opened, he felt scared but then relieved as a hero had arrived! They talked out a plan and decided to escape. They escaped!…

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      28th Sep, 2015 at 7:26amm

      Lovely Billy!

  • Jessica
    27th Sep, 2015 at 3:55pmm

    Excited, scared and tired,
    Mummy fox carefully made it across the road to find food for little ones. Her cubs were not old enough to come out hunting with her but they could still play in the Den. Her cubs were always hungry when mother Fox returned home. Just as mother fox stepped on to the road, hundreds of people came rushing out off the gorgeous bakery store. Quick as lightning she leapt across to save her little ones…

  • Veronica
    27th Sep, 2015 at 3:37pmm

    Happily the beautiful, dazzling fox cub was playing on the woods, when suddenly a hunter came dashing through the bushes and the amazing, majestic fox cub hid behind the trees. With a blink of an eye the hunter had gone and the fox cub thought and said to himself: Will I need to be worried if he comes back to attack me? Maybe not. But the fox was wrong. The next day, the hunter came back to get the fox cub, but in an instant, a bear came and scared him away and the fox cub was safe for now.

  • Caitlin
    27th Sep, 2015 at 11:56amm

    This little brown colour fox is hunting for some food,but couldn’t find any. After a long search he suddenly see a lion far away so he tried to hide in between the trees and at the same time staying alert…..oh poor fox you can see that he’s very scared and praying for his life.
    As the lion approaches the fox, the fox tried to find a way up the trees, the lion made a run for it, apparently the fox managed to climb up and was safe.

    • Harry
      1st Dec, 2015 at 3:21pmm

      I was thinking that the lion would eat the fox luckily it got up the tree

  • Millie
    26th Sep, 2015 at 8:02pmm

    Suddenly a rustle in the bushes startled the frightened fox. She hid behind the two trees waiting to see what would appear. An animal with pointy teeth, razor sharp nails and red eyes appeared. The fox froze with fear she was scared, petrified and could not move from the spot. She waited quietly hoping this unusual animal would go away and leave her alone. The animal crept closer and closer, the fox grew more frightened with every step the animal took. There was no escape where would the fox go next………

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      28th Sep, 2015 at 7:30amm


  • Elizabeth
    26th Sep, 2015 at 12:44pmm

    Petrified, scared, worried, the hunted animal glimpsed through the gap. She was only young yet was so brave. A glint of fear in her eyes as she pounded on away from the hunter.

    She held her breath as she pounced over the rocks. The more she looked back, the more frightened she became. Then she ran many miles before collapsing near a river.

    Finding strength from somewhere, she got to her feet and thundered on. Suddenly, the human threw a net . Her sharp teeth cut the rope and she ran. She was safe…for now…or was she?…

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      28th Sep, 2015 at 7:31amm

      Excellent Beth!

  • Lily
    26th Sep, 2015 at 10:26amm

    Crouched in the shadows at the foot of the fence, is a red fox. A young mouse scurries though the grass nearby. The fox remains quiet and still, she cannot see the mouse, but she can hear it. The fox leaps from her hiding place and pounces on the mouse and traps it beneath her front paws. Carrying the mouse in her mouth, the fox slips through a hole between two bushes and disappears into the woods. She comes to a clearing and stops, dropping the mouse beside a tall fern. The fox pushes the fern aside to reveal a hole in the ground, a fox den, she’s home.

  • Sarah
    26th Sep, 2015 at 8:43amm

    Scared, frightened, overwhelmed, the hunted animal hid in the trees. She was only young, but she had been hunted loads of times. Without any idea how long she was running , she sensed it was very early.
    Desperate, she ran into the darkness. Desperate, she got a glimpse of the hunter. She really needed to get back to her family and make sure they were safe. The more she thought about them, the more she started to panic! Would they still be alive?
    Finding courage from somewhere she raced to her hole and scampered into it. She was safe. For now…
    dun, dun, dun!

  • Dylan
    24th Sep, 2015 at 4:38pmm

    BOOM! The hunter fired a bullet. Fox peered through the gap dodging the bullet. Fox ran as fast as he could go. Eventually, he stopped at a pool of clear water. He bent down to take a drink. A shadow appeared. It was a bear. Fox ran like lightning through the forest. He ended up on marshy ground. Suddenly, a huge crocodile appeared, snapped its mouth but just missed. The crocodile tried again and caught a bit of fox’s tail in its mouth. Fox ran away again to hide. He hoped no one could smell blood would he survive?

  • Joanie
    23rd Sep, 2015 at 6:44pmm

    One morning a fox was strolling around the forest. She was a very shy fox. Then she heard a big bang and she started to get really petrified. She ran to a big, thick tree and hid behind it. Terrified, the little fox thought she had out-ran the noise, but it started again. Eventually she ran around part of the forest and found herself in a ditch. She then found out that the noise was guns. She could hear the hunters closer and closer and closer. She ran out of the ditch, found her home and sped down it. She was safe. Or was she?..

  • James
    23rd Sep, 2015 at 6:13pmm

    One day there was a lonely fox that was hiding from a scary lion in a tree. When the terrifying lion came near the fox he growled at the fox’s hiding place and found her. Scared, brave, terrifed, the fox ran for her life and the lion is going straight after the fox. Luckily there was a good place to hide however the lion is growling as usual around the fox’s hiding place. The fox is safe for now……

  • Joseph
    22nd Sep, 2015 at 5:38pmm

    Frightened, scared, petrified, the animal ran away from the hunter. She peered through the trees. She couldn’t see him behind her. How would she ever get back to her family? The more she thought about them, the more scared she became. Although she was injured she had to run on. So she ran. She was nearly there but a big man stood in her way. He had a big metal cage. She tried to run away, but it was too late, she had already been captured…

  • Summer
    22nd Sep, 2015 at 4:37pmm

    This beautiful fox is hiding in the forest from something or someone following him.
    The fox started running faster and faster each time. The foot steps got louder and louder and scarier and the little fox got even more scared and began to run even faster.
    Then suddenly the footsteps stoped and the fox heard a voice so he ran behind a pile of logs, where he noticed a shining silver object.
    The footsteps started again and the fox started running again. Then the fox turned round and realised it was someone trying to take a picture of him, so he gave a big cheesey smile.

  • Ellysha
    22nd Sep, 2015 at 3:24pmm

    This beautiful fox is hiding from people who may want to hurt her I sometimes see her in my garden at night if I look out of my bedroom window or out of the kitchen window she likes to nosey at my toys I have on the garden. It would be funny if she played on them. She’s a lovely colour of red orange & has bits of white on her front I’d love to play with her but she would be affair because she’s a wild animal not a pet. She’s looking for lunch probably mice. Sometimes I can hear foxes screaming on my back garden. The area I live is known for having lots of foxes.

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