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100 word challenge – 23rd February

  • 23rd Feb, 2015 at 10:53am

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  • Dennis
    27th Feb, 2015 at 8:24pmm

    This is me with Greg Linteris, the astronout at the Kennedy Space Centre. He has been to space twice and told us all about it.
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    • Mrs Tauiliili
      28th Feb, 2015 at 8:56pmm

      You must tell us about it in class Dennis!

  • Molly
    27th Feb, 2015 at 4:23pmm

    Time seemed to slow down. The rocket floated towards the hole, creaking as it broke apart. All my friends and family were on that ship. Tears welled in my eyes as I watched my life get sucked into a vortex of destruction… ” The main thruster has broken! We need someone to go outside and fix it!” I stepped forward. “I’ll do it!” I got into my space suit and stepped into space… All of that seemed so long ago. As I drew closer the black hole, I stared down at the beautiful Earth below me, knowing it would be the last thing I ever saw.

  • Will
    26th Feb, 2015 at 8:28pmm

    SNAP!!!!!! The cable had broken. I was floating. My heart pounding in my chest. Not knowing what to do or where to go. I suddenly felt so small compared to the rest of the universe. For I was only a human. If I had done a safety check, if I had not left my family, if I had not joined NASA, then I wouldn’t be floating in space. I realised my oxygen tank was low. I was scuppered. I had to contact earth somehow. Bits of space scrap were bumping in to me like they didn’t care. I was doomed.

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      27th Feb, 2015 at 9:06amm

      Fantastic Will! Great use of tension and suspense. Well done!

  • Dennis
    24th Feb, 2015 at 5:36pmm

    I look down at the earth from space. It was silent, silent in a way that made you feel queasy. I stare down at the moonlit Earth. The view from the rocket was good but I had never seen the Earth from this angle. The Earth was so close I felt like I was touching it. There were stars all around the Earth. I went back to the rocket knowing I will never see the Earth like that again.

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      27th Feb, 2015 at 7:50amm

      Lovely Dennis!

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