Can you write a description of this eruption? What could you see? What could you hear? What did you feel?
Petrified, shocked, bewildered, I stared at the raging volcano. I was paralysed with fear but saw beauty as the lava began to race down the black, hard volcano. I couldn’t believe that I was in this moment. Silence. A puff of ash came spurting out of the top of the volcano I then came to my senses and ran as fast as I could. Children were screaming and crying as I ran past them. I wanted to stop but I knew I had to carry on to save my own life. What will happen to us? Will we survive?
Fantastic Izzy! Great use of description.
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