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100 word challenge

  • 12th Jan, 2015 at 4:02pm

Write a description on the planet of Pandora……don’t forget your super sentences we have looked at so far this half term.

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  • Jack
    18th Jan, 2015 at 3:53pmm

    I have attached a tag cloud of my words from Pandora, I don’t know if it will work.
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    • Mrs Tauiliili
      18th Jan, 2015 at 4:19pmm

      That’s fab Jack! You’ll have show everyone how to do it on Monday.

  • Molly
    15th Jan, 2015 at 5:40pmm

    Shooting stars danced across the dark skies of the beautiful moon Pandora. Great Leonopteryx young huddled close to their mothers in treetop nests, and the Na’avi slept silently in the Hometree. Somehow, the Hallelujah Mountains looked even more stunning at night, hanging in the air like ghosts of the night. But then- BOOM! A huge monster came crashing through the undergrowth, its headlights blinding and wheels turning. Mountain Banshees peeked from atop their rocks to see this strange animal and the ant-like men scurrying around it. The Na’avi were instantly alert. They bounded towards it, preparing to defend their home…

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      16th Jan, 2015 at 7:52amm

      Fantastic description Molly!

  • Jack
    15th Jan, 2015 at 5:38pmm

    It was mid-afternoon when I first stepped foot on pandora. Some flowers were green; others were multi-coloured. Shocked, startled, amazed I looked around. Suddenly, a Thanator ran past me, it was hunting its prey. I ran swiftly back to my rocket I caught a quick glance of the Hallelujah Mountains (mountains that float) they can only float because of the rare metal (unobtainium). Everyone comes here to try and find and take back the unobtainium. Even though I haven’t got any unobtainium, I have still had a great experience. It was time for me to go I would miss Pandora, it was way better than Earth.

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      16th Jan, 2015 at 7:54amm

      Well done Jack – you have worked hard to include the sentence structures we have looked at in class. Keep it up!!!

  • Emily
    13th Jan, 2015 at 3:57pmm

    Thank you Mrs Kelly and Mrs T!
    🙂 🙂 🙂

  • Emily
    12th Jan, 2015 at 5:33pmm

    It was early in the morning when the mysterious land of Pandora awoke. The birds sang their songs, and the unique creatures flew their traditional flight, stretching their wings. Surprised, shocked, curious, several creatures awoke to find that their home was being investigated by humans. These humans took notes as they spotted the Hallelujah Mountains which seemed to be hovering with help from the force of unobtainium (the very rare metal). The flowers bloomed along the lime green grass to provide firework bursts of colour. Luminous plants glowed as if glowing was a new thing. What a world it is!

    • Mrs Kelly
      12th Jan, 2015 at 9:03pmm

      What fabulous writing, Emily! I really like the way you have included ideas from what we were doing in class today 🙂

    • Mrs Tauiliili
      13th Jan, 2015 at 7:55amm

      Lovely Emily – I like your descriptive language. I’m looking forward to reading your classwork about Pandora.

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