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100 word story- 6th May 2015

  • 5th May, 2015 at 11:09pm

 

If only he had not forgotten his camera, if only he had woken up earlier, if only he had met up with the others he would not be here right now. But where was here? Looking about him and seeing the cool clear sea lapping against the boat  and the hot sun beams warming his skin, he didn’t feel so anxious. Maybe this place wasn’t so bad after all!

What happens next? Is this a good adventure or a nightmare. Does the mystery of how he got there ever get cleared up?

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  • matthew
    16th May, 2015 at 11:34amm

    I looked around me, wondering what had happened. Then I saw that my boat was moving towards me and then someone jumped out! It was my friend Jake. Together we walked around the mountain. Then I saw a giant snake! Quickly we jumped out of the way, however it still knocked us to the floor and we felt it coil around us! I threw a rock at his eye. He let go and we ran as quickly as possible to get away. When we got very far away and were safe, we made a camp.

  • harry2
    13th May, 2015 at 7:13pmm

    As I approached the island, I wondered what had happened to this place. Were there new settlers here or new extraordinary creatures, or even some new kind of surfaces, unknown to mankind? It was like the Earth had shedded it’s skin like snakes or a new type of creature that lives here. I hopped, skipped and ran but couldn’t find anything except bulls with their horns pointing down. I thought, what are my friends doing? I couldn’t imagine, I tried to call them, but I didn’t have a signal. I decided to make camp!!

  • Gino
    13th May, 2015 at 6:26pmm

    He was stranded on his mysterious small boat, but he had a feeling of anxiousness in his wide tummy. He had a fishing net to catch a lot of huge and large fish. After a while he caught a humongous killer king shark that he chopped it up with a knife that had been used before to cook salmon. He wonder how he got here in the first place he thought. Then he remembered how he magic appeared in this deserted ocean. It was a accident the captain was drunk and fell out of the boat and we were lost.

  • Maddy
    10th May, 2015 at 7:34pmm

    As Bob stepped out of the white almost perfect boat, he stopped and steared out to sea. There were dolphins leaping up into the air . Bob went to an island where he found coconut and mango trees. He walked on and saw exotic parrots. If only he would have brought his camrea along with him on his journey .Bob was amazed how he ended up by accident in such a amazing and beautiful place. It didn’t seem to bother Bob if he was away from home . Until so utterly disappointed he was when he realised it was all a dream.

  • Laura
    10th May, 2015 at 6:57pmm

    He looked from the back of the boat towards the open sea where the water was darker. From the inky coloured water he saw the shadow approach slowly heading towards the boat. He did not know what it was until it got closer. The dorsal fin was cutting through the surface like a knife through butter, getting closer.
    He was not worried as he was a shark expert and knew that he was safe in the boat. The shark hit the boat strongly putting a hole in it, the boat started to sink, now he was starting to worry.
    Tune in next week…

  • Harry1
    10th May, 2015 at 5:44pmm

    Stranded! He had been nominated by his former teammate Jimmy Bullard. David Beckham was on I’m a celebrity get me out of here. After weeks of starving he had had enough, He had a plan he was going to build a boat, He used wood that he found and tools Ant and Dec gave him. After another week of eating crocodiles and bugs he was finally ready to escape. He set off and after two minutes he heard a snap. It was his oar. He was stranded again!

  • James
    10th May, 2015 at 2:09pmm

    The man sat down. Where was he? He had just sat down in his boat to have dinner, when his motor started and he had hit his head on the floor. He had woken up in the middle of the Caribbean Sea! As he trecked around the island he saw large ship wrecks and even an abandoned lighthouse. he slowly walked in…but to his astonishment everything he needed was there! A shovel and pick, maps, navigation tools and enough food to last for years! Why had the owner left the island? That night he found out…..When the skeletons arose from their ship wrecks….

  • Seamus
    10th May, 2015 at 1:56pmm

    Suddenly the wind picked up the trees flopping against the roaring gales of the hurricane. Then he heard a great galloping but he couldn’t work out what was chasing him until it was towering before him, skin hanging from its bones, it’s skeletal body reaching out a hand. Rain now lashing down he gazed into it’s brain-scrambling eyes not noticing the hand rip off one arm, magically the storm died and the monster was gone…. But so was his arm. Pain killing him, blood flowing like a river from the stump of his arm he only just noticed skulls everywhere.

  • Seamus
    10th May, 2015 at 1:47pmm

    Suddenly the wind picked up the trees flopping against the roaring gales of the hurricane. Then he heard a great galloping but he couldn’t work out what was chasing him until it was towering before him, skin hanging from its bones, it’s skeletal body reaching out a hand. Rain now lashing down he gazed into it’s brain-scrambaling eyes not noticing the hand rip off one arm, magically the storm died and the monster was gone…. But so was his arm. Pain killing him, blood flowing like a river from the stump of his arm he only just noticed skulls everywhere.

  • Tatum
    10th May, 2015 at 11:22amm

    One minute I was at school and the next I’m on a boat! Confused and worried, I sat, it was then I heard a noise. Was someone else on this boat? I looked around and there was! A boy was sleeping. Suddenly, he woke up and looked just as confused as I was. We asked each other questions about where we were. Still not knowing, we drove past lots of attractions. The strange thing was, was that we saw London Bridge and The Eifel Tower in the same place! I wondered how I got to that boat. It was a mystery!

  • Ryan 2
    10th May, 2015 at 7:47amm

    After he landed he realised it was a holiday resort, a place to relax and enjoy the baking hot sun. However, he suddenly felt and saw water heading his way! He soon found that this was only the start… because he noticed the water having a under ground storm, only made by his rival. He made sure that it was not from a movie or a game. It was real that jaws came to eat him. But then he was in his bed, at the evening in his bed. It was a nightmare.

  • Miguel
    9th May, 2015 at 3:31pmm

    The man decided to row his boat closer and closer. He saw lighting strike onto a tree on the island. The tree burst into flames. A nearby volcano suddenly erupted with lava rapidly shooting out. It wasn’t cool after all. A tornado was formed; the volcano threw lava into the sea. He rowed towards the sun. Had this been a nightmare he previously had, if so, it came to life. A tsunami was heading towards a quickly opening crack in the earth’s surface. He got ferociously pushed back into the crack and landed on a pile of remaining stones. His boat floated towards the tornado and got torn apart. How should he get back now?

  • Lydia
    9th May, 2015 at 2:55pmm

    The guy was very excited until, the water started to turn yellow then orange. The boat he was in turned into the devil. He was in hell and the only thing keeping him from going in the lava was the devil! He couldn’t trust this guy, the devil said ” Trust me, JUMP!” The guy jumped into the lava, not knowing what he was doing…….” Now!” Said the devil.The lava turned back into water. The guy awoke he was stranded on an island.

  • Sara
    8th May, 2015 at 7:12pmm

    Peering out to sea he saw a small indistinct island settled on the horizon. Paddling closer, he saw a kind of cave entrance hidden among the trees and bushes. He decided this might be a nice place to shelter for the night and from the blazing sun. On the actual island nice, edible plants and fruits grew. This could be quite a nice place to live! As he was oddly tired he curled up in the cave and slept.
    Stretching and yawning as he woke Illias saw before him his own bed, room and house. So it had all been a dream!

    • Grace y4
      10th May, 2015 at 6:21pmm

      good job!

  • Ryan 1
    7th May, 2015 at 7:26pmm

    Wait! He just realised that he was stranded with no food or water. He had to get out of there, but he didn’t want to leave because this place looked so nice. He waited there for a couple of hours trying to decide whether to leave or not. Eventually he decided to go back home to get food and water to bring back to this strange island. But, there was a really big storm that lasted for a few days so he couldn’t go home to get the food and water. After the storm had finished he saw that a lightning bolt had hit the boat, so he was stranded forever!

  • Amber
    7th May, 2015 at 4:25pmm

    As Joe came out of the sea and walked on to the deserted beach he thought to himself how great it was to have made it to this island and maybe now he would have a chance of being rescued. Joe had meant to be going on a fishing trip with his friends but the weather forecast had predicted storms and his friends had decided to go bowling instead, but Joe was determined to take the boat out. The storms came and Joe’s boat had been tossed around and out into the deep sea. If only Joe hadn’t been stubborn!

  • Georgia
    6th May, 2015 at 6:04pmm

    Cautiously I pulled the heave boat to shore and saw a mysterious island. There were different kinds of flowers, fruit and trees. I was rambling through the woods scared and exited as ever. When I saw a house in front of me with two hungry children inside, who had no mum because she got lost. I feel very sad for these children so I said I would find their mum. They thanked me, when I was hiking around it looked beautiful and colourful I saw a woman and said come with me, here is you children they said thank you

  • Charlotte
    6th May, 2015 at 4:03pmm

    He looked around and stared. Nothing he had seen before was so beautiful! The lake was a perfect baby blue colour and it was a beautiful day. UNTIL… The sky went as dark as a black cat and a tornado grew bigger and bigger in the gloomy day. Trees waved, earth grew cold but it wasn’t earth. It grew bigger by the second sucking everything in its path. The man realised he was living his nightmare he had that night. He was sucked in to the huge tornado and no one saw or heard of that awfully unlucky man again!

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