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100 Word Challenge 24th February

  • 24th Feb, 2015 at 2:32pm

The Aliens have landed!

Where has the spacecraft come from? What is it doing here?

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  • Isobel
    1st Mar, 2015 at 7:46pmm

    A spacecraft has landed and we do not know why. What should we do? Call the police? Go and have a look? Ignore it? Well we decided to call the police and wait. When the police arrived they were shocked they had never seen anything like it. They called a local scientist to help. The scientist arrived and immediately began to work on the ship. He examined it and found a small red button on the door of the ship. He pushed it and suddenly the ship began to hover, make a noise and shoot up into space! Wow!

  • Harry
    1st Mar, 2015 at 12:33pmm

    Hi, I’m Jimmy and I’m an alien. I come from millions of light years away. I come from a planet called planet B. My friends call me Jim or more specifically epic guy. One day I went into the space-craft. BOOM! The engine roared like it was in a rage. The rocket zoomed off. Suddenly the engine failed! The rocket fell to Earth! Unbelievably, the rocket crash-landed in the sacred heart primary school shalom garden. As the human children came back to school I have been hiding in y4 classroom . The children will never find where I am hiding!

    • Mrs Rafferty
      2nd Mar, 2015 at 11:36amm

      You’ve got me worried now…!

  • Harry H
    28th Feb, 2015 at 3:44pmm

    Sacred Heart School Tuesday 24thFebruary 2015 04:00am:

    BOOM! CRASH! SCRAPE! BANG! FIZZ! (GROAN)

    Sacred Heart School Tuesday 24th February 2015 08:44am:

    I was at school and I noticed that there had been a crash. Straight away I thought: where had it come from? What was it doing here? It might have come from Mars and had crashed here, I guessed.

    Sacred Heart School Thursday 26th February 2015 08:45am:

    MRS KELLYS OFFICE AND THE CLASSROOMS HAD BEEN TRASHED!!!
    My class saw the alien. “Please can you help?” Said the alien nervously. “Of course we will” Said my class. And we did.

  • Luke Y4
    28th Feb, 2015 at 11:42amm

    The Aliens have landed!

    Where has the spacecraft come from? What is it doing here?

    For many years humans have searched the solar system looking for intelligent life forms; perhaps this spacecraft is the first sign that other life forms exist, and that they too have been searching space for other beings.

    We hope the aliens have come to learn about us, how we live, behave and to see if we are friendly? But are they friendly? Are they looking to take over the planet? What will become of the human race if they are not friendly?

    We need to be nice to them and show that if you are good to other people and other aliens, then hopefully they will learn to be nice back to you.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      2nd Mar, 2015 at 11:35amm

      We’ll done with those paragraphs Luke.

  • Carys
    28th Feb, 2015 at 9:46amm

    Today when I got into school there had been an Alien invasion.P.C Doolan and Professor Rosswell Rendlesham came to investigate. All the classses saw the rocket.Unfortunately,I was at the back of my class .But ,because I was at the back ,I heard a noise .So,I went nearer and I couldn’t believe my eyes … “AN ALIEN!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!I screamed.
    “Shhhh. Replied the Alien.Hi I’m Zortog ,please help me repair my spacecraft.”
    I didn’t know what to do , I was struck dumb.Zortog gave millions of reasons why to help him .Suprisingly I said yes .I kept Zortog a secret .It took me and Zortog forever to repair the spaceship. Finally, me and Zortog repaired 2 things.The rocket and a friendship.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      2nd Mar, 2015 at 11:32amm

      I really like the ending. Well done Carys.

  • Jacintha
    28th Feb, 2015 at 9:45amm

    After the half term holidays, we all met together on the 23rd of February. We had a Magic Monday writing. The next day, we found that a rocket had crashed into our Shalom Garden! There were plant pots near the rocket which had foot prints in them. On Wednesday morning, every class room and even Mrs Kelly’s Office was very very messy! All the children’s books were scattered on the floor and because Mrs Kelly had a box of sweets, her Office was full of sweets! On Thursday, Mrs Kelly went missing. Who kidnapped Mrs Kelly? The Aliens? If so, why?

    • Mrs Rafferty
      2nd Mar, 2015 at 11:31amm

      How mysterious…

  • Cicely
    27th Feb, 2015 at 8:20pmm

    This is me & my family at Kennedy Space Centre. We met an astronout called Greg Linteris. He has been to space twice.
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    • Mrs Rafferty
      2nd Mar, 2015 at 11:28amm

      Fantastic! Did you ask him any questions?

  • Cicely
    27th Feb, 2015 at 8:00pmm

    He’s safe back on his planet.

  • Grace
    26th Feb, 2015 at 5:36pmm

    Tuesday 24th of February 2015

    “ERROR ERROR SPACESHIP LOW ON FUEL” I heard as Pilot Alien worried. I felt very scared. The spaceship was going to crash land! It looked as if we were going to land on earth.
    Then suddenly I found myself twisting and turning around in the spaceship…

    BOOM!

    We had crash landed. Everything seemed a lot brighter now we were on earth. I was worried! I checked my eggs to see if they had got damaged during the flight. Nope, they were ok.

    We were all told to stay in the spaceship because it was dangerous.

    • Mrs Rafferty
      2nd Mar, 2015 at 11:22amm

      How exciting! There are so many questions I want to ask. Which planet are you from? How many of you are there?…

  • Cicely
    24th Feb, 2015 at 7:13pmm

    Dear diary,
    Today I was entering school. It felt like a normal day but then something caught my eye. It was a rocket that had crashed in our Shalom Garden!
    Out crawled a little green man. His name was Mr Mercury. He walked into the Shalom room. Mrs Roche asked if he’d like tea and biscuits. He replied back “No thankyou. I only drink alien juice and eat space invaders.”
    Mr Mercury had a wander around the school. He walked straight to the y4 classroom and met me! He said he liked all the decorations. Mr Mercury said his rocket had broken and asked if me and all the children could fix it. The mission for the y4 children that day was to get Mr Mercury back home…

    • Mrs Rafferty
      24th Feb, 2015 at 7:48pmm

      Did the children succeed with the mission?

    • Mrs Kelly
      24th Feb, 2015 at 7:57pmm

      Cicely, this is wonderful writing, well done! I hope the children do manage to help Mr Mercury to get back home.

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