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Writing task 2 – Spring

  • 30th Mar, 2020 at 9:31am

Write a paragraph using the picture as inspiration. Focus on your use of synonyms and antonyms. You can write the start of a story, or a description. I have started the first sentence for you…

It is the beginning of Spring and there are new lambs in the fields…

Comments

  • millie
    20th Apr, 2020 at 12:08pmm

    the lamb, trotting through the breeze of the spring air, taking in the world yet to be discovered. The small animal would stay rolling in the lush, fresh grass and would some times stumble at the small rocks hidden inside. The flowers around it would rock slowly at his feet and the clouds , creating shadows of shade for the lamb ton lay in.

  • Chelsea
    8th Apr, 2020 at 8:44amm

    The cute, inoccent lambs quietly eat as the calm breeze drifts over there face.Other lambs then join in but none of them make a sound.They are so happy and peacful unlike other lambs who scream and kick and are constently angry.Lambs that are joyful are free to go where ever they want without hate.So, they stand there, being happy as the time slowly passes by them.

    • Ms Clarke
      8th Apr, 2020 at 11:53amm

      Hi Chelsea, thank you for a lovely paragraph. Don’t forget when to use their and there.

  • Holly
    5th Apr, 2020 at 10:36amm

    The full-of-energy lambs freely ran around ignoring the sound of their surroundings. They grase upon sweet-smelling grass and breathe in the refreshing air. They play till day becomes night. Then the fun is over.

    • Ms Clarke
      6th Apr, 2020 at 10:53amm

      Good use of hyphens Holly.

  • Federica
    4th Apr, 2020 at 8:18pmm

    It is the beginning of Spring and there are new lambs in the field. Gentle rays of the sun cover the emerald green grass. Baby lambs innocently play ignoring the life surrounding them until daylight disappears and they snuggle around their cozy mother.

    • Ms Clarke
      6th Apr, 2020 at 10:52amm

      Hi Federica – that is a lovely image you have created.

  • Maison
    3rd Apr, 2020 at 11:36amm

    It is the beginning of spring and there are new lambs in the field enjoying the sunshine and the freedom of running around.😄

    • Ms Clarke
      3rd Apr, 2020 at 4:58pmm

      Hi Maison! Glad you found the blog 😉

  • owen
    3rd Apr, 2020 at 11:20amm

    Year 2020 corona virus hit England, I go out for my daily exercise I stay away from other people. I run past a field with a goat and when I see it it gives me hope for the upcoming spring.

  • Poppie
    1st Apr, 2020 at 10:55pmm

    Sorry about the picture I don’t know why happened😬😬

  • Brooke
    1st Apr, 2020 at 2:59pmm

    It is the beginning of Spring and there are new lambs in the fields. They silently walk across the lush, tall grass where flowers bloom wildly creating small shadows from the radiant, scorching sun.

  • Poppie
    1st Apr, 2020 at 1:25pmm

    It is the beginning of spring and there are new lambs in the fields. The white fluffy lambs slowly trotted towards the long, lush green grass.

    • Ms Clarke
      1st Apr, 2020 at 2:03pmm

      Hi Poppie, how are you? I hope you’re keeping busy and not arguing with your brother too much!

      • Poppie
        2nd Apr, 2020 at 12:57pmm

        I’m fine but bored and I’m not fighting with my brother………that much : )

  • Jack
    1st Apr, 2020 at 9:42amm

    It is the beginning of spring and there are new lambs in the fields. The looks and smells nice and all of the beautiful baby lambs relaxing silently. This place is so stress relieving i will come here whenever i’m stressed. 🙂

    • Ms Clarke
      1st Apr, 2020 at 10:08amm

      Thanks Jack, I hope you have seen some lambs on your walks.

  • Rui
    31st Mar, 2020 at 9:49amm

    It is the beginning of spring and there are new lambs in the fields. The fields are peaceful and quiet but lambs are happy and playing, jumping up and down all along the field, most of lambs like help from their mother and most spend time with them learning how to pretect themselves.

    • Ms Clarke
      31st Mar, 2020 at 12:32pmm

      A lovely image Rui.

  • josh
    31st Mar, 2020 at 9:30amm

    As I smelt the sweetness of the grass and heard the lambs crying, the sound soothed me as I watched at the edge of the field. When I looked on, I could see the mother sheep eating the emerald grass. Even though the fence in front of me was refusing to let me past, It felt like I could touch the soft wool of the baby lambs. As darkness fell, I slowly peered back and saw the lambs drift off.

    • Ms Clarke
      31st Mar, 2020 at 12:31pmm

      Beautiful writing Josh. Make sure you are varying your conjunctions (eg. as).

  • Jess
    30th Mar, 2020 at 1:29pmm

    It is the beginning of Spring and there are new lambs in the fields. They frolic and play all day long. Happily, they jump about the sun-filled, grassy field with no care in the world. Play fighting with other lambs, they ignore their mother’s bleats. As the darkness crowds around, they cosily snuggle up to their mum in the chilly, starry night. When dawn breaks, they leap about the fresh dew-covered grass. This is the life of a lamb.

    • Ms Clarke
      30th Mar, 2020 at 2:42pmm

      Lovely Jess 🙂

  • Cole
    30th Mar, 2020 at 10:45amm

    “Eating grass peacefully not an argument in sight this is what we should all start of like happy, calm, peaceful, not disturbing,angry, horrid so will you help me?”.

    From Cole 👌

    • Ms Clarke
      30th Mar, 2020 at 1:06pmm

      Thanks Cole – nice to hear from you.

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